She of the Long Flowing Hair
- Raymond Luczak
- May 20
- 2 min read
By Raymond Luczak

She
of the long flowing hair
cascading like the river 22 stories below
telescopes far
on the avenue
where
humans skitter along,
carrying their lunches and backpacks for another day
in the office
and in hospitals.
She
cannot see their faces
but she can see the stories unraveling from the way
they ambulate
between dream and day
where
the fog rumbles quietly
from the darkest recesses of their brains only to be
recast as angels,
their eyes brightening.
She
of the one day to come
when she will board the elevator and press the button
for the lobby
and rejoin these souls
where
they will walk past each other,
never asking for their names but always recognizing,
recalls how once
she had been so touched.
She
had grown up among
this city thrumming under her feet. Strands of her hair
fell everywhere.
Her DNA took—
where
it was dark and lonely—
root in the dynamited bedrock to make way for the
underground trains
and in the steel beams.
She
didn’t notice how
the city was evolving to look more like her spirit.
The new buildings
looked fashionable
where
details were good enough
but blended anyway among nondistinctive towers.
Too expensive
to decorate much.
She
refocuses her lens
on a man swaggering with a grubby backpack cutting
deep into his
shoulders as he stands
where
she once saw his face
startled with illumination as if from somewhere else,
a small-town boy
cursed with big-time dreams.
Raymond Luczak is the author and editor of 40 books, including [Exeunt.] and Animals Out-There W-i-l-d. His work has appeared in Poetry, Prairie Schooner, and elsewhere. An inaugural Zoeglossia Poetry Fellow, he lives in Minneapolis, Minnesota.




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